Parted awaiting legs
Eager with anticipation
Taut, alluring nipples
Commanding attention
Flexed feet, curled toes
Appealing to your inner freak
Arched back
Yearning to be touched
Luscious lips needing to be kissed
Me waiting for you to take me!
A contest entry
- Adult Quickie - 18 plus. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended June 9, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Simple, but very relatable! Like the way this is just to the point, like how I feel and yet, very well chosen.
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Oppss... almost forgot (you got me excited
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And you live... where again?
... Wonderfully erotic without all the fancy words... just need and anticipation... what a sensual combination... Well done and best of luck...
Ken


