The sun while setting, red the rays of light
reflected in the rooftopwindows shine,
The moon replacing, guardian of night,
so cool and tranquil, make me feel all fine.
The wizards, wielding windgusts with their wings,
while diving try to catch some insectkind,
Their chatter sounds like lively flutes or strings
of violins, they make me feel all fine.
The trees, so old, with brightly green the leaves,
are always covering this home of mine,
and watching children play in these nice eves
till mother calls, that makes me feel all fine.
And sitting here I watch the ending day
while calming down: The reason I like May.
Author notes
This is option 5: Write about a comforting object/thing/food/smell etc. One of the most comforting things I know is just sitting outside on a beautiful evening in spring calming down and watching the surroundings.
A contest entry
- Options lots of options by Nakatrea.
600 points, ended June 15, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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very nice. a calming piece. i liked it a lot. great write and thanks for entering! I wish you the best of luck ( my self to considering i actually have to judge this contest)
~Kat *♥*
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