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Her Life


She was pretty
She was thin
She was perfect
Outside and in

She was funny
She was smart
She had a very,
Loving heart

She wasn’t rich
She wasn’t poor
She was welcome
In every door

But then one day,
She took cocaine
It made her body
Really pay

No more game
No more fame
It all had streamed,
Down the drain

She was in the rain
Trapped in pain
It was all
Her to blame


She was confide
Always denied
All the time
She had cried


Hated life
Took the knife
There she put it,
In her side

Made it wide
There she lied
Surely she had died
That girl committed suicide…

NOW HERE’S “Her life”

She’s not pretty
She’s not thin
She’s not perfect
Outside nor in

She’s not funny
She’s not smart
She doesn’t have
A loving heart

She’s not rich
She’s not  poor
She not welcome
In any door

Why?
Because there’s NO MORE…

She ruined her life
And put it all in pain
And all she did
Was try cocaine.




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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Oh...this is very touching my friend..you created the atmosphere which made me to think and to ponder over the issued you raised....thank you so much for entering my contest.....


  • endless-lover silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    speachless!!!
    doll you took this away really
    i mean wow this is so being booked marked!
    and i am so cheeking out more of you!
    i wish you the best in the contest amazing poem again!

    xoxox

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