I don't want you to go,
to walk out of my life at all
my tears flow as you leave me stranded in a world so cold
will I ever touch your hand again, to hold it close to mine?
will I ever hear your charming voice again at least on the other line?
But you don't have to answer, I already know
your going to the frontlines and leaving me behind feeling low
I love you too much not to care or cry
but the bottom line is its just another mourning goodbye
Author notes
Parrot name: Peewillie
Option #1
I wrote this reflecting my feelings about my ex-boyfriend going to the army.
A contest entry
- Random options. by Shrat.
600 points, ended July 30, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so filled with emotion and beautiful. Great write. Your rhyme was good, and stayed steady, which is a great thing. Nice job!
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Very well written and had a lot of feeling.
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I know this feeling oh so well, and its good to see the other sex's perspective on this. Its hard to maintain a relationship in the military, especially when we are at war. I applaud this to the fullest extent possible, my sympathies.
Silvos.
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Beautiful
This is truely amazing and beautiful! Two of my best friends are probabley going into the Navy and my cousin is in the army about to go to Iraq. I'm sorry. Keep up the good work! Kayla^_^
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