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Autumn's Child

Without September I would not be
Autumn's Child.
The breath of life flowed in me,
on the tenth, my birthdate.

Author notes

I was born on September 10th, 1948. My father's birthdate was the 14th and my grandmother's the seventeenth. My dad died on September 6, 1983 but I was the last child born to my parents. Making me the Autumn child

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I am a September baby. In 2008 I will be 60.

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  • Winklings gold member
    July 20

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    The essential statement for you!
    Fine concept of "Autumn's Child".
    Thank you.
    Lyndon of the Winklings.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 17

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    Your author's notes explain it all. Very compact thoughts in brevity. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • February Moon gold member
    June 27
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    I enjoyed this.


  • WWildBill gold member
    June 13
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    I can so identify I was born on September 1st. I love this little gem you've written


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    June 9
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    beautifully personified and expressive... x

  • Sprite silver member
    June 9

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    Lovely tribute to your birth. For you, September is VERY important! Good luck in the contest. ~ Joyce

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