Living like I should
Knowing that I would
Make all these mistakes
Was a chance that I would take
Feeling all my pain
Can drive you insane
And all my hopes and dreams
Are not what they seem
I'm reading a blank page
Of the story of my life
And all tha pain inside of me
Is killing me inside
Being lost in my emotions
Is what has made me weak
A heart filled with tragedy
A soul that cannot speak...
If I could get a chance
I'll take it with these hands
And draw it to my heart
That has fallen apart
I'll try to meand my soul
Make it pure and whole
Because sometimes it seems
I have no hopes and dreams
Author notes
the song reminded me of one i wrote so i thought i would share it with the world... thanks for the oppurtunity
A contest entry
- ♪♥ Stand where I stood - Song inspired CONTEST ♥♪ by Rebekah-Ann.
600 points, ended June 25, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Even when your hope is gone, move along by Barely Breathing.
450 points, ended June 21, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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OMG! THAT WAS SO GOOD! =]
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This is such a lovely write and so fulled with pain and emotion. the last line was so powerful. All the best for the contest.
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when you close your eyes then what... see now you've got me all exited
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Well Done
WOW I feel like if I close my eyes long enough... Every nice poem
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Feeling all my pain
Can drive you insane
My fav lines. Well penned beautifully. good luck.
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WOW!! this is really lovely!!! Thank you for your lovely entry!!!
THis would be a platinum song! I can hear the notes for this playing in my head! ♪
All the best in the contest!
Becks
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