I look all around me,
Everywhere,
Every one,
They all seemed to fit right in place,
Like a puzzle,
But not me,
All I am is an extra piece,
An extra piece without a place.
I am forgotton,
I am alone,
So different,
They look at me like I'm a freek
And I just don't belong
I am here like a drop of blood in pure white snow
I feel like I'm the only one,
The only one who is sad,
The only one who is lost,
I cry and cry,
My eyes,
So wet and swollon,
But they don't stop to help.
They don't even care.
I am nothing to them,
Just a worthless, extra piece of the puzzle,
With nowhere to belong
A contest entry
- Desperation leaks through imaginary happiness... by Clinging-to-Life.
800 points, ended July 8, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Sad...btw spelling mistake in line 20....swollon is "swollen"
besides that, this was a very nice write. not much imagery but I do appreciate the entry and the time taken to write this. thank you for entering -
I bet everyone can relate to this at some point in their life, I know I can. Nice job
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Wow this is very good i feel like this alot of the time but not always coming from a hick family being the only one who actully knows who acdc is... is actully kinda sad... my favorite part is "I am here like a drop of blood in pure white snow" Thats very good wording.. keep up the good work...
Nice job -
like a blood drop on your pure white snow. WOW that is amazing wording. Props.
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