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Diabolic Dior







alone, you remained-
your cloaked paradise.
but every time it rained
i knew,'twas you:

in disguise.





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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    Another beautiful piece from your pen. Excellent take on the prompt. Congrats on the HM
    Gaylene


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 9, 2008
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    cleverly drawn... x


  • Madhumita
    June 9, 2008

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    WOW WOW WOW!! this was simply amazing!!!! awesome gal!!! u've iproed a great deal in the past 1 yr...keep up!!! r8 write.luv ya...mss ya! bye!!! tc..