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counting days


till


your july eyes
will sail me
ashore

&

snow-flakes of doubt
will fall on me
no more.

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  • underestimated1
    June 22, 2008

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    very interesting. i wish i could write such a beautiful poem with such few words. this poem really made me stop and ponder.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    Congratulations on the well deserved silver


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 9, 2008
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    just stunning... x


  • Madhumita
    June 9, 2008

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    oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh....so ddep nd so good!!!!!!! well full of emotons nd dersire nice write...hun! cum ol on gtalk...

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    Beautifully penned on the prompt!'snowflakes of doubt will fall on me no more'. *Sigh*. Gorgeous wording
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene

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