With stars
in eyes she wanders
over distant waters
and mountains,
following the harps of night
among the blades of wild dark grass,
water lilies, fern and sedge.
Winds harness her voice
to sails, to the foam of waves.
Words...
liberated ships
come from the port of heart,
gently leaving old shores,
meandering from source to estuary
listening to echoes of distant voices.
Flames dance in her bones,
fists tightly closed to grasp and hold the past.
She sings blues
and I wonder
where all birds have gone
when she needs
only one.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Swanee... How We Love You by PageTurner.
1050 points, ended June 16, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Following the harps of night" - what an evocative phrase!
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Thank you dear Mairi
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I read so much dross and verbiage on the site that I try to be kind to....this work of yours needs no kindness, it is a marvellous evocation and moves along with such a sure poet's touch. Mind you, I didn't quite grasp the final verse - probably my loss.
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This is a beautiful, I dont know how to describe it to tell you the truth.. I truely like it.
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This is really interesting .. and beautifully put together! I love the analogy of words as ships .. it's a gorgeous vision, and one I would never have thought of! Good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful words in an amazing series of phrases. I particulary enjoyed the last stanza..it was beautiful. Good job!
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I love this line: "Winds harness her voice
to sails, to the foam of waves."
also the last stanza is great, i really enjoyed this.
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Your poem contains lovely images and metaphors, and describes a person one would like to know. "listening to echoes of distant voices" suggests the reason for the title, an old grief. The last stanza is a good question - applicable to many people.
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"following the harps of night
among the blades of wild dark grass,
water lilies, fern and sedge.
Winds harness her voice
to sails, to the foam of waves."
This is beautiful, Sonja...You've demonstrated an acute understanding of my very foundation with these remarkable words, my Friend. With the integrity of a true artist, you've displayed compassion, deep knowledge & a sense of kindred. I thank you for this wonderful penning, Sweetie. I do love the ocean...& yes, I often wonder where that one bird is, too. Good luck in Nicky's contest, Lady. 
Wanda
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I am so glad you like my verses. My wish was to write something special and nice for you. For a very long time I read your poetry and I understand you much more than words can say. This time I dare to use Nicolette's motto Whatever I understand, I only understand because I love... but I will add something, I would like to continue this circle with my own thoughts - ... and I write because I understand.
Happy anniversary dear Wanda.
~Sonja~
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SO LOVELY!!!!
Ah, one but has to experience a little faith and one can then move mountains, faith and hope brings courage and strength to ones heart.
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Outstanding
The imagery in this poem is exquisite and the language soft and well-chosen. The poem is full of different nuances and I liked the ending. The words reflect the picture and help bring it to life. Best of luck in the contest.
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A beautiful piece of writing this is, Sonja...as always your poetry is fragrant and soft as grass and water lilies. A wonderful and moving dedication to Wanda you've written here.
~ Nicolette
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An immesnely powerful write which is wonderfully presented. Great metaphor and imagery to create a truly moving piece - Nice work!
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You show profound deep meaning in your metaphors and a wondrous feeling flows throughout your feathery focus on your Friend
Me thinks, Swanee will Swoon!
Good Luck in the contest, Poet!
~ Nicky♥
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A beautiful write and presentation. Heartfelt. Lovely metaphor. Good imagery, flow and tone. Deep expression of emotion. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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