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Out Pouring Of Passion (Collab. Poeticweaver)

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Precious rain, showers your love upon me,
bringing me sweet calm and passionate love.
Ignite my lips as you bite down briefly,
causing a sting that excites me enough.

Over top me you hover, eyes locked in,
as you tenderly slide between my thighs.
Upon our face there are tears of longing,
as sweet sensations engulfs our lives.

Passion presses against your soft petals,
and I drop to my knees to please gently.
Rock me baby as your comfort cradles,
the silken essense of you upon me.

Dreams within our passionate poetry,
but faithful love has lifted us as we.

Author notes

Okay 3 in one night, you trying to write a book before the weeks over. I thank you cause my hearts kind of down and you have surely lifted it.
Love you dear, and thank you for being who you are.

A must read:

poeticweaver : http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver

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  • Volfeng
    June 20, 2008
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    I can't read too many of these in a row...whew hot in here.. very ummmm visual stuff


  • Galaxy2
    June 20, 2008

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    'Sliding between my thighs'....
    Oh my...
    I always enjoyed that...
    my favorite sport...

    Kisses...of course...on thighs....
    Galaxy2

  • twodie4
    June 19, 2008
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    Simply beautiful. The more I read of you the more I enjoy. You go so well together.
    td4


  • Griswold silver member
    June 10, 2008
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    Another fine write penned by you two. You're on a roll I see. Love you Tory...Scott


  • poetryality silver member
    June 10, 2008

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    The beauty of the skill in collaborations is the inability to detect where one poet ends their writing and the other takes over. You two have easily mastered that skill.

    There is passion in this work, a sensuality that compliments love-making, and raises the adrenaline almost to eruption. Exquisite work with this duo succession of sultry sensations.

    BRAVO! I fill the "uplift".


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      June 10, 2008
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      Thanks so much Renee we both appreciate your comment. Now that was a WOW comment.

      Much love

      poeticweaver and Passionspromis


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    I don't believe there are a better pair of collaborators on AP. Everything you two do just seems to work, how about the two of you sitting down to design a time machine or a cure for cancer?
    I'd bet on it succeeding!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    You are both beautiful!!!
    This is a beautiful Collaboration
    Very visual


    love
    Messy

  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    I Love You Sweet Soul!

    I love the light we shine entwined divine in rhyme in each line.
    Thanks for sharing you, no matter if we sometimes are blue.
    We have each other, and all who care for us here.
    Hang in there sweet soul. Peace, and thanks for penning with me.

    Love ya, Timothy

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