I view the world in shades of gray
I do not stop to see its colors
Rushing through the world like this
I spare no thought for others
Considering the sights I’ve seen
You’d think I’d feel alive
But I have never felt so helpless
In a world where beauty dies
History has come again
To repeat its deadly acts
But I do not see the danger
In my world of white and black
I’ve forgotten what its like to cry,
To laugh, to love, to feel
I wonder if I’m happy
And I wonder if it’s real
Years have passed, too long for me
I know it is my time
I wish I would’ve stopped to see the colors
I wish I’d felt alive
I close my eyes and smile
I smile through the pain
Never will I see again
My lonely world of gray
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this is exceptionally well written. i like it.
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wow, once again you have amazed me!
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I hope you don't mind my adding you to my fav list,in fact,YOU are the list.When I read your words I find them so unsettling that even while I'm not logged in I'm thinking about them.You are exceptionally talented in my opinion.I have one poem "Fragmented Futility",that I would be honored for you to read and give me feedback on.It is indeed a pleasure to make your acquaintance.
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Amazing
Beautiful write love.
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CHAWESUM!
ive always loved ur poems since freshman year and till this day you have never shocked me with a bad poem... lylas keep it up!
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beautiful
this is absolutely amazing! I love it! I feel all the pain you try to expose in your writing, wonderful job! Keep writing!
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