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[ The lullaby drifts thru the air, A twisted awful sound. ]

The lullaby drifts thru the air, A twisted awful sound.
Its been playing every night for a long time now.
I used to be a dreamer, and i would write about my dreams.
Recently i haven't had the heart to write for fear of what ill say.
please just hold me in your dreams, cause im dieing in mine.
and your so far away ive never been so alone.

Author notes

its bad... but its mostly to hold some lines till i feel up to really working, i hate sleeping alone

dont you wish i had something new to say?

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  • abusedxduckiie
    June 10, 2008

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    My sweetest Nick. You know you are always in my deams. This is indeed a sad piece, But good. I miss you deeply and wish i could be by your side all night long once again. *giggles* you were the best part of waking up. (I stole that from foldgers)


  • Momma Cupcake
    June 9, 2008
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    Your always in my dreams&prayers ^_^
    This is a sad write but far from bad.


  • Melodies
    June 9, 2008

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    You are never alone if you are at All Poetry, you know. Sure, you can hang out in my dreams with me for awhile. I was taking a nap and woke up four hours later so now I am all messed up.