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Poetic Passions(collab Poeticweaver)

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For many years we've shared much time entwined,
and I have grown quite fond of you my dear
May you hold me close in your heart and mind,
you're one of a kind, and no-one compares.

Never could another fill your sweet spot,
only you have captured my heart and soul
Sometimes we write romance and then some hot,
and then I find myself losing control.

Lonely is this world without love in it,
and you lend a shoulder to lean upon
Cradle me deep inside your rhymes of wit,
for I need a vision to carry on.

Within our hearts we will always remain
kindred spirits of a passionate rain.

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Wohhoooo another one honey pie

Again a light to my penning, Timothy.
Thanks for honoring me once again.
Love you.

A must read poet:
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  • Griswold
    June 10, 2008
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    Another well done collaboration. Love you Tory...Scott


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    Another Sensational collab of beautiful minds.

    This is very endearing you both write well together


    Love,
    Mess


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    You two do write so well together I am running out of thigs to say!
    Keep it up

  • pruedence
    June 9, 2008

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    Lovely words of love and respect for another. Well expressed and simply said. Wonderful, thanks for sharing


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      June 9, 2008
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      Indeed full respect. Always a pleasure writing together. Thanks so much for reading us, we appreciate it.

      Much Love

      poeticweaver & Passionspromise


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    Brilliant!!!

    Shining with all the luster of life, and as hot as the sun, this poem is a masterpiece!!! Great job, poets!!! Peace, Cyn


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      June 9, 2008
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      Thanks so much we appreciate your comment.
      Much Love

      poeticweaver & Passionspromise


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    Love This!

    Thanks for sharing your sweet soul with mine.
    You are such an inspiration, and I enjoy penning with you!
    Thanks, Thanks, Thanks. Lots and Lots!

    Love ya, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo

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