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Sigh

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Speak softly to my heart, for now it sleeps
buried in Mundane's fields, somewhere deep within
with life's sweet amusements stapled to its numb skin
unfulfilled dreams mourned, with only simple sighs
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  • Jonathing66
    June 9, 2008

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    Very Good

    Thank you for entering the competition.
    I love the colour scheme. It is not quite grey enough for me to win, but wonderfully misty