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Being grave

the days where love left us dry and abandoned,
rusted and uprooted as i seem to just vanish,

those are the truimph, the glory and fate,
yearning for her taste every single day that i wait,

waste what i want not to waste after all these years,
money and love and forgetting to even still try to care,

i have a new love and old love and it's always unclear,
you may have words for me, but i might not have the ear,

If you said it was over I'd decorate you in a burial gown,
Rotting but I'm climbing up from being six feet down...


A contest entry

Not your conventional poet but a solo musician also

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  • ElijahsRaven
    July 6, 2008
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    thanks for the entry

    interesting poem. Dont know if it fits the contest requirements though. thx!