Silence...
overtaking, fearsome, emptiness,
silence...
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I dont know..
A contest entry
- Capturing Emptiness by Jonathing66.
600 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
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I don't know...
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a good poem, aye silence can speed past us then turn around and capture us in its grip, then we are lost in its folds.
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Short but sweet. U feal the emptyness.
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Reasonable
Thank you for entering the competition.
your character sounds a little overwhelmed
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Within silence, darkness takes over our minds. Hatred, fear, negitivity, and doubt cralw their way into the mind. Never live in utter silence, it'll kill you. Excellent write though.
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I wonder how weird it would be to be deaf or blind, maybe that could be a take of emptieness
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I agree
but my mind wouldnt stop racing even if it was complete silence.
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When there is total silence... the only thing heard is one's self. Great take on the prompt
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Sometimes when its really quiet there isnt even a sound.
or like a silent movie
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