No reasons to hold me back,
all memories have rusted with time.
Have lost the compassion to live,
this meaningless journey called life.
Author notes
Feeling of emptiness is hidden in every soul somewhere and the fact is everyone tries to ignore it ,run away from it or act as if they have never experienced it , but thats so not true.
prompt- capturing emptiness
A contest entry
- Capturing Emptiness by Jonathing66.
600 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Thank you for entering the competition.
This is great, you really got what I was after.
bleak subject matter, straight meter, unemotive words.
and yet the feeling is conveyed beautifully. Well Done
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wow, thanx for the glittering gold
you made my day
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