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Angel's Rose (Collab. Poeticweaver)

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Here I am, glancing again in your eyes
you know I will love you forevermore.
When I'm down and out, you hear my deep cries
and you're the only angel I adore

Within a moment I will embrace you,
guard you my darling within my soft wings.
Draw you tight I whisper "we'll make it through."
For only you can make this angel sing.

I soar upon your gossamer feathers
and I bury myself within your arms.
For your honest love makes me feel better
your musical hymns keep me from all harm

Through the night we embrace each other close,
never let go of this angelic rose.

Author notes

Once again, Thanks Timothy.
Your always welcomed in this Angels embrace.
Love you.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    Oooh this is amazing!! another duet of hearts.


    love,
    Mess


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    How beautiful and touching! I love the rose blooming...perfect for this lovely poem! Many blessings to the both of you!!!


    Az


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    Lovely soft words and as always the two of you writing together are a delight to read.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 9, 2008

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    Just a sweet and soft collab, a beautiful combination of love and friendship and the faith of both. Love, C


  • spideracer gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    I give you 8 points. Very sweet.

    Your poem has meaning beyond my years. If only I could write as such. Although I personally feel my best work is in front of me, and one day I hope to be as good as you. You are the poet I aspire to be. I'm sure to read more of your work in the days to come. Check out some of my poems and let me know what you think. Bye for now, spideracer PS. keep up the good work.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    Awww, how incredibly sweet. I am happy to see you have someone to turn to in times of need. All the best to you in your writing.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Sweet!

    We can write a book, lol.. And I'm loving every line and verse of it! I love ya V~ And I'm honored you share your ink, and some time with me.

    Much love, Always
    -Timothy


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      June 8, 2008

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      Well yes we can, and I would be honored..we only have...how many more to go??? I guess I cant go no where yet lol.
      Always enjoy spending time with you.
      I love ya as well

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