My faithful hand is on your heart
through every pulsing thump and pop.
I clutch your heart with cherished care
and hope to never let it drop.
Author notes
30 words (including the title)
What does this poem mean to you?
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Sweet
I think that when true love comes at you, you should take it and hold it. A love like that might not come back to you. So take chances Live Love Life -
this poem is a very short one, but i liked it for it was about love and i am a hopeless romantic and it was also powerful.
good emotions was put into this poem.
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This should....
totally be your vows when and if you get married!!
Bravo-
Harmony
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Nice flow and show of emotion and devotion.
Brevity with cleverity.{is that a word?}
You're good... Write On, Poet!
~ Nicky♥
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Cute
and full of fun. You deffinatly said a mouthfull in a short space. Sometimes too many words clutter up the reason we are speaking out.
KoS
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I like the way such a small amount of words can still deliver a strong message. Great job.
Much Love
Carrie
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I decided to let you finish this one before I commented lol. Its really great, if a bit graphic... jk, your imagery is very good (unless of course your actually clutching her heart, which is a bit icky, but I doubt that) Anyway, great job, and with only 30 words, I dont think I've seen much better. Nice one!
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nice friendship poem
thanx abe
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I like its message and its wonderful immagersy which has come up so strongly..thanks for sharing such a deep piece...
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Good use in adjectives. It will probably relieve your loved one that you don't plan on hurting them. Nice write
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