Total anialation of every dream within the eye
of the beholder, lost, alone and every part of
a emotionless body, nothing wanted, nothing gained,
nothing of the worlds disdain, the world's disdain
Author notes
I know that anialation isn't spelled right and the spell check can't seem to find the word. So I have left it as such
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A contest entry
- Capturing Emptiness by Jonathing66.
600 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Definitely see how you related this to the contest. Nice write.
The word is spelled "annihilation"
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Reasonable
Thank You for entering:
Subject matter is good, flow is a little too busy, words are a little too emotive for the contest
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This is really sad, the emptiness it details is quite truely captured. Well written, my dear friend.
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