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Still

My heart shattered
To uncountable pieces.
I lay and reiterate your words,
It still flabbergast me
How tactless they were.

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 17

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    I think I have felt this numerous times in this life, the pain of words that resound for years to come, left me wanting more. best to you in the contest


  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 8, 2008
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    Excellent take on the prompt. Thanks for sharing