She glistens as if the moon
was her permanent spotlight,
The elegance in her stance
is like an afternoon's delight,
Ignorant to the impression given
when she smiles, wow...
What an alluring silence,
Reminded of a mother's warmth
in her embrace,
Captured by her aura, humble
in her grace,
I ponder the of the ingredients
to her creation,
Wonder if the recipe can be imitated,
I find the structure of a rose to
be one of great interest,
I question if she's a replica
of its velvet essence,
Her voice has the presence of
a still moment in time,
I applaud the creator's thought
behind this design,
Amazed that her womb can
rebirth such a gift,
Who am I to be worthy of
the sun's kiss?
Speechless to an explanation
of her inborn purity,
Though nature's a woman herself,
she's still a naive beauty
Author notes
Expressing my thoughts on the "beauty" of a woman.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, off the chain yo. I see you haven't been posting anything new. I can see why. this prolly tops all the new ideas you got goin on lol. But yea, holla back yo
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excellent
wow this is very beautiful.
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hmmm
I like the velvet essence,
and nature's a woman herself
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roaming around and happen to have bumped in to ya spot ga this is on point glad for tha authors notes dough i almost thought i had me another ga in tha cut diggin in on tha chics i luv this you did cha thang!
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Well done, lil sis. Write on. One.
Dez
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very kind and upbeat i like the flow great job.. good luck
♥Katie
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wonderful!
sweet words on the beauty of and in nature. very nice flow, and a nice rhythm made this piece even more enjoyable to read! good luck in the contest my friend!
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Indeed you have done so...Poetess
stopping by to wish you all the best as you continue on this journey. Your thoughts are warm and pleasing in every word.
Keep being who you are
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**forgot the 't' in spotlight**
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