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We Loved

You loved me.
You loved me like the sun rising gold and crimson,
Quiet in the dewy morn with all the hidden
Passion and ecstasy of a first, true love's kiss.
You made me love.
You made me love you like the sea,
With the rythmic, deep blue trilogy of song,
Flowing through my soul's veins with such
Speed that my body perished every time we did not touch.
We needed eachother.
We loved eachother.
But why, why would you leave me?
Our two hearts were one and we could not sever,
But you made us break with such coldness
That death could not even call our pieces to follow.
When you knew that I am not of the blue mists of Venus
But the fiery rays of Mars you killed us.
You stabbed the knife through the link between our bodies and souls
Because you could not accept my choice to change.
I changed like the sea in which you are,
To be with you.
To hold you.
To love you with such force that when our souls
Touched we would have no deliberation, but the
Constancy of us, together, united like our bodies
That first summer night,
When in eachother we found love and we never would relinquish our hold.
We loved with the thundering beats of our hearts
And the merging of our soul's melody to make the perfect
Symphony of love.
But you denied the song when I told you I am not of this
Body's sex, but of your own testosterone surged beauty.
We loved.
But you cast it away.
We loved. 

Author notes

1) I was born female, still am female, and will always be female.
2) I am a virgin.

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  • Justin
    June 8, 2008
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    This was a wonderful write. I enjoyed the vivid imagery that you painted with your words. Your vocabulary did this poem justice. Haha I don't mean this in a rude way, but are you sure you're a virgin? This sounded very realistic! lol!

    Thank you for your entry!