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Love or Home

I dwell upon this word; love
what does it mean?
will I know, when it exposes itself?
many times, I have exploited my heart

purring, with empty hands
stroking it

I believed I was in love
but what a difference
being in love and to love

with you
I was in love
then believed to love you

today, I find myself lost
what if I move
with you
miles away
only to be stranded
and abandoned
like I have
to the people I know
I love

will I find the same comfort
in you love

like the warmth
of a fireplace
in the heart of a house

will it still feel like home?

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 19
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    Wow this metlted my heart in a big way

  • Wow. This poem is deep and soulful. Excellent work. Keep the ink flowing!

    Alvamear

  • Your trepidations at moving to be with someone are well voiced. I know what your poem means. It can be almost paralyzing to be in that prediciment.

    Great job.

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