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Embraced in thoughts

A battle between both good and evil occur
not to one simple soul
but everyone.

A battle gets raged against both.
Inside and out
personally or worldly.

Does only one of them win?
Triumphing over all.

Does good always conquer?
Does evil always corrupt?
Or do they intertwine?

Do they in the come together as one,
almost unified
to complete the battle?

Coming together to complete a mortals soul...

You tell me.

are we all good?
or all we all evil?
Or do we embrace our inner demons and live in compromise?

Would life or cry to admit to that?
Or could we just embrace ourselves as one
and unify life for our selves?

Could it work?
Does it happen?
Only time and you will now the answer to that my friends.
decide in care

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  • patsoldcat
    June 13, 2008
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    good

    embrace ourselves as one good line.
    lots of luck in the contest.


  • rainyday woman silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest, good luck in it and in all you endeavor in life.
    Cheryl


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    excellent questions,

    that only we can answer for ourselves.

    very deep with a peaceful message.

    God bless...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Wow,

    Lots to ponder upon, and I sure know how I wish life to be, and you can say I wish it were heavenly.. I tend to plant seeds of love, and hope they grow into other souls. And reap what I sow. Thanks for this inspirational piece that makes my pen want to weave. All the best within this contest as well my friend.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • sweetnsassy125
      June 8, 2008

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      I think everyone come to a point in their life when they wonder all the "what if's" and then how did i ge4t here?a nd how can i get the beauty and happiness in love an life that I want.with honesty from all. Thanks Timothy for your thoughts and for taking the time to read it. :-)
      thank you....jess

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