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Henry's Battle for Justice

The battle cry rings out:
"Remember your desperation!"
Leading forth the valiant charge
is Henry Thoreau, our eccentric captain.

The night before the battle,
we were all in camp around
the bonfire when the captain made
a comment; actually he murmured.

I heard him say "The mass of men lead lives
of quiet desperation."  And to be honest,
at the time I didn't know what to
make of it - I don't think anyone did.

The hours before battle make people very
reflective on what they have or had, on
what they've done in the past, perhaps regrets,
or they're pondering the future still ahead...

But in the heat of battle, I know now
what our captain meant: that man, or rather
humankind, is fighting, struggling to be free,
to live our lives unbound by fear.

This sounds broad and varied, and could
apply to anything - indeed, it does.
Freedom from opinions, schedules, unnecessary
work and restrictions demanded by life's common modes.

It is a message to live the present moment and
take it all in - the field, the air, the sky...
As the battle rages on, I understand and hope
it's not too late for me; that there's still time...

I do not wish to be counted among those who
lead lives of quiet desperation, to get sucked
into the hectic pace of routine only to find
that life has passed me by, that I have not lived.

Even now, as I struggle and fight,
I note our captain has fallen in battle,
lost in the valiant struggle, but at least
he did not succumb to desperation's dry well.

Although he's gone, all is not lost:

the battle has ended, and my life was not taken.
With his words my hope is resurrected, and so I'll

go on to lead a life quite opposite of quiet desperation.

Author notes

1). "Normal is not something we should aspire to be, but rather something we should shy away from."
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"The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation."
Walden Pond, by Henry D. Thoreau "Economy" (chapter)

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 2, 2008
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    Bravo! This is wonderful well composed by a very outstanding poet!


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    June 24, 2008

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    Ilove a poem with a point. It winds around in an interesting manner that kept my focus till the end. I love the way you tied the ending into the quote.

    Thanks for your entry


  • Luckintheshadows
    June 19, 2008

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    An excellent write!!! I love this, it made me think of a mixutre between Mosquito Coast (just my twisted way of thought) and the poem "Oh Captain My Captain"....a truly thought provoking, down to earth, honest assesment of the way mankind simply survives.

    Thanks for sharing this, and for entering it in my contest,

    Luck.

  • JWGoethe
    June 15, 2008

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    A deeply reflective, intelligent and well thought out write. Prose like in its wonderings, it asks fundamental questions that we all must struggle with. Very well expressed. Thank you for bringing it to my attention


  • edgar allen matt
    June 10, 2008
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    This poem is great, im gonna check out your others


  • Lucy.
    June 10, 2008

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    It is a message to live the present moment and
    take it all in - the field, the air, the sky...

    So true! I love the thoughts expressed here. We should all take note! Well done and thank you for sharing it.


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    nice thoughts

    This is very thought provoking and so true. We oft let so many things rob us of the moment of living and all that is before us right now. This is a nice piece my friend. Your pieces are always so varied and interesting. God bless you and keep you, Mark

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