The tongue finds its way
following the river
into passions night
as a siren cry her delight.
The scent of hair's musk
urges his lust
as the land bucks
under his tongue's thrust.
Now there are screams which
haunt my night and her dreams.
Echoes of lust
and memories of the thrust.
Now is the need in groin
and the desire in the mind
haunting both
looking for what they must find.
It is a cock and pussy night
full of drinks and lies and
wanting for
flesh, hair, and fucking blind.
He the explorer and she the find.
She the seeker of a lover's mind
Together claim
for love they will give their all.
A contest entry
- Sooooo Sensual.... by SummerlandRayne.
450 points, ended June 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sexxy baby make me hot! by Night Terrors.
400 points, ended May 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great job I liked this thanks for entering
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SMOKIN !!!
Oh my gosh...Totally erotic and very sensual.Very well written and the descriptions were wonderful.Great imagery... No, excellent imagery! I love a good sensual read. It's not over the top, but beautifully done in a great and wonderful taste. Just gives me the warms tingles just reading this.
This write just says so much, The poem bleeds passion... and that is both something I can relate to and revel in... every word dragged me in further, very nice, passionately written, thanx for sharing such sensual delights with us.
I wish you all the best in the contest my friend.
Take care and many beautiful blessings of love and happiness I send to you.
your loving friend in poetry,
~Angel~
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Wild and heated tongue action...very lustful...this poem could stand to go on for a bit!!! Thank you and best of luck!!!
Az
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