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as the ocean tides came

 in land
my soul

                       departed
 

 

A contest entry

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  • ConvenientExcuses
    June 11, 2008
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    WOW!
    I really love this one!
    You're extremely talented!


  • Catressa gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    oh how beautiful!!!

    It through me off i thought I clicked wrong (cause I am dense like that)

    I admire any kind of graphic work..

    Take care,

    Catressa


  • And Hyetal
    June 10, 2008

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    This is beautifully written! I love the presentation of it, too. Very deserving of the silver!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 9, 2008
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    Love it hun


  • Tattboyspet
    June 9, 2008

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    sheesh - a bit depressing for so early in the morning lol!
    your soul could NEVER depart my friend - you have a pure soul that is meant for a pure person
    contgrats on the silver


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    nicely done

    congrats


  • ZachP silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    simple, yet complex
    sad, but beautiful
    well done

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