There are passages
that only my tongue knows
There are passages
where only my tongues goes
damp echoing caverns of flesh
Somewhere between her legs
each covered with mesh.
There are hairs that my nose knows
above the place where my tongue goes.
while moans of my siren cries
There are passages
to which my love always always flies.
A contest entry
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700 points, ended June 14, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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hehehe, this is cute, and a little funny. i liked it overall, it was a good read. i loved the line, " there are hairs that only my nose knows." lol, too adorable, and i loved the unforced rhyming. i tend to be waaay picky about rhymes, as so often people will sacrifice flow for a rhyme.
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a very good feel seductive direct
creates a deep desire - a fiery thought
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lovely erotic imagery i like the there are theme to it, works so well
Cindy
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Seduce me...
why don't you? I absolutely loved the imagery in this. Very interesting, the passages
thank you and good luck.
-e
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very sexy without being so graphic
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