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Infusions [HM]

Scoring the thunder
of a sanguine sunset,

      or as breathless as        
the faintest whisper-

Whirling words- are
infusions of magic.


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20 Words ~ Prompt:'Essence Of Words'

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    Don't you just love that word...sanguine..yum
    excellent Ithy!


  • lilAj
    June 9, 2008
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    'sanguine sunset' loved it


  • KayJay
    June 9, 2008

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    I love this... "Scoring the thunder of a sanguine sunset"... so lyrical and such a powerful image... Congratulations!
    Ken


  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 8, 2008
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    Excellent flows and perfect. A very good take on the given prompt, thanks for sharing


  • Mallig gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    This is a perfect, gorgeous write!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    What a lovely flow.
    Love the wording.

    Good luck.

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