Words
like blowing sand
can be caustically abrasive.
Irenically used,
they sparkle
with jeweled light,
building images of
fairy delight.
Author notes
irenic: tending to promote peace or reconciliation; peaceful or conciliatory
Prompt: Quote "These Words Are The Sands of My Shore"
©Malabu 2005
Picture Credit: http://auroracoda.deviantart.com/art/Castle-in-the-Sand-32982006
20 words exactly
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie...10/20....Prompt is UP!!!! by Sweet Sorrow.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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well done.
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Great work Ken..
Nice Job on the Pic.. and I learnd something new today..
Thanks... Your friend in Poetry... JackReed3..
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So true! They can be caustic or aimed at peace... a lot of depth inside this lovely imagery!
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Excellent take on the prompt where there is this words of wisdom inside this piece. Well penned and thanks for sharing
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Builing images into the fairyt night. I see you did well on the prompt that Mali gave! You did well, awesome write! Godo luck in the contest ~Sie
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How sweet! A very creative take on the prompt too. Well done!
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Words of wisdom hehe I like this alot. Best of luck my dear friend.
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