stale slogans curdle
like cream spoiled
yet substance drips saliva
Author notes
Cliche=Death
Oh I think I got confused about what the prompt was. Oh well. lol
A contest entry
- 10/10/10 Pic Inspired by ZachP.
400 points, ended June 8, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I don't care whethere you got confused about what the prompt was - I think this is phenomenal!
You have explained death (with no cliches) completely uniquely (yeah, I know that sounds wrong, but it's true!)
congrats on the HM
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Either way you wrote a great piece love you
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interesting
nicelydone
I love you and good luck
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Hmm... the prompt was the picture, lol But this was a good take on cliche=death, I'll let it stand
lol.
Thanks for the pen, a great take on the 'secondary' prompt
Good luck! -
*Tory Peaks in* Psssst good luck to you in the contest.
s i will be back when its finished..
Love
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