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A wounded heart

Knock not others
with bunches of pinching words.
A wounded heart is more cruel
than the  lion in the forest

Author notes

'Essence Of Words'

"These Words Are The Sands of My Shore"
©Malabu 2005

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  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 8, 2008
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    what an excellent analogy here...excellent take on the given prompt. thank you for sharing


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    I like your analogy in this write. *A wounded heart is more cruel than the lion in the forest* So true! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.