Tongues lick
the mind
with intention's salvia,
but fingers
write their meaning
in the permanent stains
of smile and tears.
Author notes
20 words
Prompt - 'Essence Of Words'
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie...10/20....Prompt is UP!!!! by Sweet Sorrow.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sigh.. so true! You sure know what writing is all about to us who pen those smiles and tears.. congrats on the silver
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Great take on the prompt. written words are for forever indeed..what a lovely piece..best of luck dear
Ruby
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excellent~
Love this
No truer words ever spoken
Looks like a winner to me
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Excellent take on the prompt, well expressed. Thank you for sharing and goodluck.
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great job grandpa
i love you
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