Love of my life where are you?
Cause I can't imagine life without you.
Thousands of miles won't keep me away,
and I'm hoping to hear, "please stay."
They say roses are very red,
but love poems like that are dead.
Voilets can't always be blue,
Cause I'm happy whenever I'm near you.
I've been working all day long,
and still my feelings for you are strong.
You keep coming into my mind,
Can't wait until our lips are entwined.
You'll always be my one and only love,
And every word is true above.
Hope your day is very sweet,
coming home soon, I feel incomplete..
I don't know...
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indescribable
this is beautiful beyond words.ive tried many times,to convey the feeling you put in this piece,in my own work and failed.i can only hope i can reach this emotion.this line "I've been working all day long,and still my feelings for you are strong.
You keep coming into my mind"ive felt many times so i understand it very well.very good ill be back for more.
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Awe, so touching..
Can't wait to read more love letters to come.
This are very endearing and heartfelt. I like them ever so much.
-Mandi
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I think i understand for whom is this
i feel how lucky that boy is
and i know there will be many more love letters will come
from your part, i wish you get the result
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So touching and beautiful - and painful for me right now elsewise words of praise would torrent forth - great work.
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It is spoken from your soul...
we hear your soft feminine voice yearning...and dear
poetess it is truly beautiful!
good for you, and yes, it does take a while to feel
comfortable doing it too...makes you feel a little
vulnerable doesn't it...but that's what touches the
soul..and reallly makes your love beams shine bright.
Let's hope your soul of mate's is not too distantly
away.
way to write! so inspiring and lovely to enjoy!
ears/Seattle
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