where there's a hope there is a will
but what is a will with out a breath of hope
if i were here with you today
would you take my breath away
when i stand by your side
i know your there till we die
but how is it that in this day
you've taken my breath away
with out a breath i have no hope
but you with yours give me life even when there is no hope
i see the sun rise in the west and set in the east
and now i know its not my breath that gives me hope
but tis the breath of the one that loves me
A contest entry
- Quickie Quote Prompt # 6 by BluesMan.
875 points, ended July 16, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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Very heart felt Thank you for entering my contest
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wow.... thhis iss very well written!!!!
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