http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5o5F7moFS8
forced beauty shines through
in my fragile smile
I'm only smiling to make them believe
I am something
Mourning day after day
grieving from the lost
of my beautiful soul
I never had
I try each and every day
to find my beauty within
each try is harder then the last
but I do it anyway
Author notes
I used the song shown in the link to describe the story of my life.
A contest entry
- WHAT MUSIC/SONGS DEFINE YOU????? by Rianna Bear.
600 points, ended July 5, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Does Music Soothe Your Soul? by your angers a gift.
440 points, ended September 30, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great song for the youtube thing...I liked how you incorporated it into your own poem...and great message comming from this...I believe thats what we all have to do...anyways...great write...thanks for entering
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congrats on the bronze, I like this piece, however i think theres a grammatical error in the second stanza
'grieving from the lost
of my beautiful soul'
Is it supposed to say 'grieving from the loss of my beautiful soul'?
anyway, a beautiful write non the less.
neon =D
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wow could be mine too... dont think ive heard it but i didnt check it out since right now i cant my computer keeps crashing so i cnt look at stuff like that.... but thanks for sharing this and soon as i get my computer working again i will check it out... good luck in contest....!
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amazingly beautiful song that i added to my youtube favs! thanks for sharing your life in song!!
♥rianna
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