Though his love was genuine
we shed the same tear,
Sleeping in our shadows
wishing he was here,
I am in love,
And she just as me,
But with a sympathetic soul
I'm willing to share my dream,
Is love really free?
Because this seems to be at
the cost of my heart,
Her happiness is his joy,
His joy...my art,
Descending from my muse
for the survival of her existence,
We shed the same tear,
With contrary reasons of happiness
Author notes
MahoganyFlow
Hope it's what you are looking for.
A contest entry
- Giving Him Up by BlackBloodyRose.
300 points, ended June 13, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oooooh!!
This is amazing! got to be fantasy though, because I've never heard of this type of unselfishness in matters of the heart! You done good poetess!
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You know what lil sis...
I think you penned this perfectly, from your Poetic soul. The words are smoothe, and flows in harmonic passion from deep within. Good luck to you in the contest. I really enjoyed this, especially the ending, very passionate.
-big sis
ephiphany
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its just what i was thinking
i like this it is very nice ver painful sounding i like -
great job!
i think this fits the prompt very well...and its alwayz a hard and sad thing to do even when its the right thing to do...
much luv
♥kaila♥
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