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Coaxing bait.


It leaves a heart in a skip of a beat.
It may even lead things a astray.
Corrupting at times.
And even incomplete.
Allurement is its task.
Seduction and attraction is its accomplishment.
A desire that should be avoided.
Influenced by exciting hope and shame.
Discouragement is a decoy.
Tantalization attractiveness,
coaxing bait.
Don't get puled in to the...

-Temptation-

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  • wendymolly
    July 17, 2008

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    this is as an enjoyable poem as I believe I've ever been wowed by! very well thought out, this is a timeless little poem that speaks to all and on many different levels. and so it is with that, that you are by all means a contest finalist and I wish you well! take care always, ~pithyAplomB.