Hopscotch never looked so fun
skipping across the path of our life
forgetting block one and two
none of it matters when I'm with you
with nothing but happiness in sight
on my 18th birthday, we will marry
over seas we will be
you're the enlistee
and i'll be the escapee
away from troubles and distractions
i'll be your one and only main attraction
and our little house will be full of glee
when I tell you that we, are having a baby
across the ocean
smiles will be seen near and far
you'll always have my devotion
and on days of sipping alcoholic potions
we'll regard all misleading emotions
and indulge in the one true relaxing feeling
the luxurious feeling of never concealing
lets forget the plans of yesterday
and look forward to the passion at play
What does this make you feel?
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huh I don't know why I haven't read this piece. You did an amazing job writing this, hun. Keep up your amazing work!!!
You gots some realllll talent!
TwiztidMAGGOT -
This piece made me happy when so many things at home are going wrong. If you did nothing else you lit a candle in my room that I watch flicker tonight with yellow flames that dance across my wall saying, "It's not so bad, Candor, life is still going on the way you always hoped it would with dreams of tomorrow." Your poem said, "Quit just living in yesterday and look over the horizon to all the beautiful lives that are being entwined and heading toward a brand new journey." Thank you my dear. RC
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I greatly appreciate your comment, I myself was questioning the truth of my life. I have a hard choice to make; stay here and live, or take a chance in the outside world at true love. I'm a real true leader among all of the followers who call themselves leaders so I will fly away and embark on a new life.
P.S. ---- p.s. means (previously stated) I never knew that until I say it being used in a movie. The past isn't worth the price of tomorrow, many of us live in debt of yesterdays. (love that{the saying}) Sincerely, Nickie
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