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You call me up
It's one am
Just to tell me
About this girl
Heard it all before
Your in love
Really this time
For real
It digs a dagger
Deeper into my heart
Suddenly the dagger is pulled out
"It's you"
Had I really heard the words
Come out of your mouth
Yes,
Finally
After all the
Girls I'd seen you with
After all the tears I cried
After the constant pain
You've brought me joy
Elation
Happiness
It's better then anything
I've ever experienced
I turn to rush outside
And find you
Already standing
At my window
Quietly I go out to met you
No more words
Need to be said
All I want to hear
Is the sound of
Your breathing
My heart pounding
And the night singing out to us
All I want to see
Is you face in the pale moonlight
Your hands reaching out to touch mine
And your smile shining through the black night
All I want to feel
Is your arms around me
The damp night air
And your lips
As we indulge in sweet kisses
It seems as if were in the air
Tumbling
Soaring
I hope we never have come back down
To earth
And touch reality
Because
With you
Right now
Here
Together
The whole world is right
Everything is perfect
Because i have you
Everything's
Complete





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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 16, 2008

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    to lvoe someone who loves someone else, or just simply wont acknowledge you in the way you would like, is so hard to deal with.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    Ah..you have acknowldged the beauty of love and the joy of life..I agree with your completeness......thanks for sharing such a wonderful verse..well done...