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Loving you (secretly)

Admiring you
Secretly
Tirelessly
Quietly
Chasing after you
Trying to love you
Hoping you'll try and love me too
Openly, secretly, does not matter
Love all the same
Many years I have already waited
I can wait so many more
So young
So beautiful
My personal
Sun
Air
Angel
What else do I need besides you?
Watching
Waiting
Suffering
You're worth it
Please don't push me away
Please don't tell me no
Loving you
Desperately
Obsessively
Relentlessly
I need to have you as my own
To have you mine without having to share
Kissing you
Fiercely
Passionately
Finally

Author notes

um... I find it creepy. How about you? option 15

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 16, 2008
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    definately sounds like my ex boyfriend
    he even admitted the only reason he didn't take pictures of me was because his dad had his digital camera
    though he saved every text or email that I sent him...he was a weird guy, would just touch my shoulder and get turned on by it.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    I like the intensity part of this amazing write touching the depth of your heart..thanks for sharing such a wonderful verse..well done...