chalk lined sidewalks that I dare to cross leave bitter blisters of defeat
A contest entry
- One-Liners by theworldisquiethere.
900 points, ended July 2, 2008, 38 entries
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Oooo, like this, the "lines" drawn, the dares, the leavings. Great take on the 1-Liners prompt. So clever!
Marlene -
I often try to cross those lines and often get those bitter blisters!!! Wicked one liner!
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woah. this is powerful. I love the alliteration with 'bitter blisters'. this paints such an intense picture.
best of lucks in the contest.
-checkmate-
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wow, chalk-lined resulting in blisters, very intruiging. i like it. thanks for entering
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bravo!
oh wow, this is a pretty intense one-liner
nicely written.
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