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No warning

You just left
No warning
No good bye
Not even a sign
Just woke up
And you were
No longer here
Your abrupt departure
Has left my heart
With a gaping hole in it
A snarling dog gaurds the hole
Only you can placate the dog
And close the hole
Only you could
Set me free from the pain
You've chained onto me
Maybe if you had told me first
It wouldn't be this way
If you'd just said you were leaving
Been there to see my heart break
I would have been able to pick up the pieces
Once you left
But none of this happened
I didn't get the ending
I deserved from you
There was no closure
No nothing
Just love
One day
Pain the next
Hardly an ending
To an amazing love
But the truth
The truth that
Keeps the old wound gushing
Out pain
The hole open
And the hope
That you will return
Alive

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 16, 2008

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    I know what it feels like to be abandoned when you need someone the most and then he was cruel months later...guess sometimes you never know when something good is going to leave.