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Smile Though the Pain

Learn to smile through the pain
Even when the moment loses its magic
And love is dead
Smile.

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  • Celticjedi
    June 21, 2008

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    This is SO hard to do, and you portrayed that in just a couple of lines! I love how you can do that! I hope you're doing well Mishi dear, I miss talking to you. I wish we could call each other or something. Keep it up, love ya!
    ~Hannah


  • Kristin Melissa
    June 11, 2008

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    This is true in some ways, you should never give someone the upperhand by letting them see you cry or be sad. You just have to look on the happier side of things. Koodles
    Blessed be
    Mystic

  • Topnotchsy
    June 8, 2008

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    Not sure what angle you are taking on this but the first thing I thought of was a quote from a famous Rabbi (don't recall a name) who once said that your face is "public property" in that it affects many peopleand therefore you should always try to keep a smile on your face. It's amazing how a simple smile can make someone's day while a frown can do the opposite. Of course they say that smiling through the pain helps ease the pain so it's beneficial for everyone involved.
    Nice write. (No clue if I took it in a totally different way then you meant it, but that's what it meant to me.)