Take this heart and toss it on the ground
Pain is all it knows and so it will not make a sound
Let my teardrops fall to earth unheard
They are used to loneliness and will not say a word
Fool am I to feel this way
It can never be
Kept apart by cruel fate
And the savage sea
Thinking time would kill the fire
Yet it still burns bright
Fueled by hopes and wishes that
Consume me every night
Quietly, this soul will break in two
Torn from desperation knowing it cannot have you
Silently my tattered spirit screams
Realizing I can only love you in my dreams
Realizing I can only love you ...
In my dreams
Please tell me what you think
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WOW
I luv how you end your poems -
filled with desperation and longing. The rhyme is a bit different than I'm used to from you but good of course.
Silently my tattered spirit screams
Realizing I can only love you in my dreams
this is a phrase I think many can relate to. How often it is that we desire in dreams only. sigh. Lovely write.
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Torn from desperation knowing it cannot have you
That line seems a little long...
Other than that, it's great to see new stuff from you. Sorry that I did not catch up with it before
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A wonderful but sad write.
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