im bleeding on the inside out..
i bleed for you
when i didnt want to
i tried to stop but i couldnt
when you found out you said it would be alright
but then you blamed every fucking thing on me.
you made it worse
made me cut and bleed more
then finally i told you we were over
but still you stole my heart and
knew i was fragile with it
i always tried to hold it back but you forced it out
you ripped it and scarred it and did stuff to me
that i didnt want to happen
you overpowered me and i couldnt stop you
you made everything worse
so i keep on cutting
now since i finally
told you we were done
i havent
i havent cut
my life has been so much better
without you in my life
i admit i hurt but all in all
its 100%better
im glad were done
im glad you cant make me cut anymore
im glad you cant get in my fucking head
and hurt me anymore
and the only thiing i wana do to you is tell you
fuck you and stay out of my fucking life
cuz i nevver wana see you again asshole!
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A contest entry
- 4 Options with Sub Options! Have a Blast! :) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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this goes out to my ex...
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I feel your pain sweetie! men are pure assholes when they know about self harm and give us more reason to take our pain out on ourselves!!! Ive been with my bf for 3 1/2 yrs and recently gotten into the self harm again due to him making me feel so low about myself....things are better now though. Well done on this, it could flow better but I can really sense the anger and frustration that you are trying to get out x
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thanks so much!! but im sorry u have/are going through a somewhat same situtation...and im glad its getting better 4 u, i have been almost stopping down agaiin and started but so far i have been able to hold back...thanks
-lindsay
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This is very personal and well written. Thank you so for entering. This didnt flow as well as it could have but is a great write just the same.
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thanks so much...and yea i to believe i might of been able to make it flow better but when i wrote it i was mad cuz he kept asking me out everyday even when he knew i had a bf that means the world to me lol....but thanks so much!
lindsay
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I have never had an ex, my bf and I have been going out for almost 2 years, though I"m almost 17...never really dated, but none the less I know the pain a guy can have over you, how they can make you hurt deeoer than death...it sucks, more than sucks. But this was good, I'm sorry for what you went through, my condolences ♥
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I definately feel your pain as if it's mine...i'm sorry you know such a darkness, it's so hard to find the entrance to somewhere better.
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AMAZING AS ALWAYS!!
xoxo- christina
love ya
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aww..thanxs!!!ur such a doll!!lol
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hehe awww ur welcome
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This is really really good i wouldve wrote something like this too. my ex is reatrded too!
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o thanks sweetie
lol
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bravo
Yes, some men suck. This poem captures the pain he put you through, but I like that you are looking ahead at the end of it.
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o thank u..and ya idk im kinda like everything that happened happened and u just gotta move on ya no..but thank u
love
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