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Raindrops

Raindrops falling upon my window pane

oh what a beautiful sight, watering the

earths dry and dusty ground in the night,

walk with me in the rain,walk with me through

the puddles, splashing with our feet so bare.

 

Raindrops falling to the earths richened

ground, what do you suppose will come

of it, a crop, a thirst quenched, or a river

unbound, beautiful rain in the daytimes

plight, washing away the dusty days.

 

Raindrops falling in the barrel of life

where it quenches even the greatest of

thirsts, birds hunting for the worms it

brings to the surface when the raindrops

end.

 

Raindrops falling from a saddened face

waiting to hide the teardrops that hover

beneath the rain soaked face, soon that

will wash away all the pain, wishes for it

to never come again.

 

Raindrops bring forth the beauty of the

green trees, and the rich vibrant color

of the flowers it helps to bloom, giving

plants and animals life with the quenching

of the thirst for the waters life. 

 

 

Author notes

This was written while it was raining it was for a contest and came to mind because of the rain outside. They felt like teardrops so I kinda wrote on this on that basis


Abariel Ravox

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  • HiddenByTheDark
    June 9, 2008

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    very good... I like how you don't just talk about the rain but discribe what will come of it..
    Love Katie


  • Simply Simple
    June 8, 2008

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    First stanza, third line. Earth's should be capatolized and have an apostrophe. Same goes for second stanza, first line.

    Please add your author's name to your author's notes. And you don't have to, but I'd like it you'd add a brief explaination explaining why you wrote the poem, what it means, etc.

    This had interesting wording and was simply beautiful. Thanks for entering.