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Violin #2

Blood flowing in silent song,
from the wounded violin,
filling the soul and distrubing the heart
In musical silence:
the spirit giving birth-

and once again my eyes are drunk
with dreams and visions-
I am hearing extraordinary music-
Heaven's melody-
The writer becoming
a prayer to God...


6-8-2008


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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    July 7
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    I like your poetry very much
    well done dear poetess

  • Tirrell
    July 5

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    I like this one as well, as a pair, part one and two are both wonderful. This one seems lighter and more joyful, as a prayer to God

  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 8

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    The art of magic, is visualisation, nothing secret or mysterious.
    The wise ones knew well this gift to man, and used it well, for the benefit of all.
    Their spirit was pure and clear, for they could focus
    on their needs and wishes, and have resaults
    Nowdays we have no ability to focus, therefore can not visualise without interaption, so we have no resaults
    at all, and have to use our hands and labore hard for just a piece of bread, and not even that
    Is it not a pity, that man has fallen so low our days
    to become a begger for his daily bread, and not a master of his own fate as he was ment to be?
    Well dear poetess, you`ve hit the nail on the head
    your write, is very poerfull, and wise.
    Keep on seen visions they do come to be reality
    and from what I see you are a master of the art.
    love your work
    Nick.

  • Bob Fox
    June 8

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    Judy

    lways words from your pen that makes the reder srach deep inside. The sadness apparent and the pen magical from one of the very best here on AP. Work on friend